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Advanced Tips and Techniques For Serious Fiction Writers
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By George Randall
Can good writing be taught? The answer to this age-old question varies, but there is certainly no argument that the elements of good writing can be learned, appreciated, and incorporated into one's own literary efforts with due diligence. In his book, Advanced Writing: Fiction and Film, Wells Earl Draughon takes on the daunting task of explaining the varied concepts, theories, and techniques necessary for the advanced writer who is interested in writing fiction for novels or film.
Draughon, who is the author of five published novels, explains at the outset that his book is not for the beginner. He assumes that the reader already knows the basics of grammar and composition as well as the elements of writing a story. His goal, therefore, is to help aspiring writers understand the advanced techniques and nuances of writing fiction so they not only will be able to improve upon their writing skills, but also achieve a level of sophistication and professionalism necessary for success in the literary world.
At the outset of his book, Draughon tackles the conundrum of "originality," namely, how unique or original should a work of fiction be without diminishing its chances for appealing to a mass audience or finding a publisher? His advice: "Every good novel or film must offer the abstract elements prescribed by this book; but it can meet these prescriptive criteria in many different ways, some of them new and different."
Throughout the book, the author describes in great detail his "prescriptions" for advanced writing, covering not only standard subjects like "depth of character," "story appeal," and "voice," but also insights into topics less likely to be featured in traditional books on writing fiction. For example, there is a topic titled "Unusual Preferences with Regard to Trivial Things" in which Draughon explains how the writer can give the main character more appeal by having him do strange things, such as "buying serious books but never reading them, buying classical music CDs but never listening to them..."
In the final chapters of the book, Draughon presents a series of practical tips on the use of language, syntax, point-of-view shifts, and revision, an excellent way to end a book that is a must read for anyone who is serious about writing good fiction.
Spiritual Philosophy Offers Solution for World Chaos
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By Peter Lewis
There are many books on the market that attempt to explain disharmony in the world and negativity within oneself; however, very few are as detailed and well meaning as How to Develop Peace in the World by Simon Monbaron. In his painstakingly detailed, 538-page book, the author describes the spiritual philosophy of Subud, "a training consisting of surrendering completely to Almighty God." The name itself is an acronym for the words: Susila, Budhi, and Dharma. Susila means the good character of humans in accordance with God; Budhi means the force of the inner self; and Dharma means surrender, trust, and sincerity toward God.
According to Monbaron, who was born in Geneva, Switzerland, and has over 40 years experience with Subud, the main purpose of the spiritual philosophy is to establish a link to God. Unlike other religions, however, Subud does not demand that its practitioners give up their own religions. In fact, the author maintains that Subud is a complement to religion, not a replacement of it, and it bases many of its ideas on well-established religions like Buddhism and Christianity.
The practical aspect of Subud, namely, how one goes about surrendering to God and establishing a link to Him, is accomplished by practicing spiritual exercises known as "latihan." The latihan involves sitting quietly with closed eyes and emptying one's mind of all distracting thoughts. In this sense, it is similar to meditation, and its goal is to place one in communion with God, or a force greater than oneself. According to Monbaron, if the latihan is practiced properly (and regularly), it will open up new spiritual dimensions to practitioners and allow them to not only gain remarkable insights into their lives, but also gain inner peace and understanding, sometimes, even overcome long-standing illnesses.
Regarding world peace, Monbaron points out that if everyone became a disciple of Subud and practiced the latihan regularly, each person would be able to overcome the "nafsus," or "lower forces" of life, such as pride, greed, anger, etc.-- essentially the seven deadly sins-- that cause humans to always be at odds with each other. This is sound advice, and in each chapter of the book, the author explains in depth how to achieve this state of mind and how the world could benefit from it.
There is only problem with this approach, and it is the same one that has existed for centuries with all spiritual philosophies in all parts of the world: the individuals who most need to include Subud in their lives, or for that matter, any other spiritual philosophy that puts them in touch with their Creator or the Cosmic Consciousness, are the ones least likely to embrace it: the rich, greedy power brokers of the world who prefer to exploit human beings and start wars rather than lead peaceful, spiritual lives. Now, if someone could figure out a way to accomplish this, we really would be on a path to world peace. Nevertheless, each journey begins with a first step, and Monbaron's enlightening book is a step worth taking.
Single Mom Goes Undercover To Save Abducted Daughter
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By J. E. Laine
A mother's worst nightmare -- her child's abduction -- shifts the suspense novel Lies by Wells Earl Draughon into high gear right from the starting line, with a smart, determined mother willing to go the distance to discover what happened to her daughter, even if it means "pretending to be what she's not" and living a life based on deceptions and lies.
There are plenty of twists and turns in this tale, as it careens onto a trail of terrorists that eventually drives heroine Linda Ramsey beyond her limits. Willing to act outside the law to find her child, the single mom stumbles upon -- then ably takes on -- agents of an evil organization, even finding love along the way. But this well-paced novel's female lead needs no knight in shining armor to ride in and save the day; Ramsey goes from victim to victor with equal parts of desperation, stubbornness and courage forging her mettle.
The writing is not quite as savvy as the protagonist, however, as it trips on an admirable -- but uneven -- attempt to convey accents and colloquialisms. But the dialogue seems real enough to keep the reader riding along.
Playing off recent headlines, the plot is as believable as any decent conspiracy theory, but the author carefully avoids being too heavy handed with social messages. He also is miserly with adjectives but generous with descriptions of the sights, sounds and smells of the settings: "As usual, the windows of Ward's pickup truck were open, exhaust fumes and dust blowing in both windows, but the sticky heat hadn't become unbearable yet."
And he often uses subtle strokes to paint a vivid atmosphere for the reader: "The excitement of the audience rose and fell and rose again like the crashing of waves on rocks."
While Draughon's depiction of the weather and skyscapes are finely drawn, physical descriptions of the human characters are sketchier, forcing readers' imaginations to fill between the lines: "Sitting at one end was a stocky man with a thick mustache that crowded his pug nose."
He doesn't give us much to go on, but what we do get is written in a fresh way that keeps the pages turning.
Anasazi Harvest Takes Readers On Mysterious Sci-fi Journey
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By Janis Dice
It takes a brave writer to mix sci-fi with Native American spiritualism, but that's just what R. Leland Waldrip does in Anasazi Harvest. The tale of a Navajo tracker living between the traditions of an ancient culture and contemporary civilization, the novel starts as a mystery, with Chaco Rivers Joseph called in to read signs at a murder scene that could lead police to a killer.
Reminiscent of novelist Tony Hillerman's approach to weaving Native American lore into a tight-knit puzzle, Waldrip steps up to the lectern to provide frequent in-depth descriptions of the Navajo people and the dessert vistas that surround them. Unlike Hillerman, he sometimes dives too deeply into minutia, watering down the suspense with details, as exemplified in this passage:
"He stepped to a gray-green, stiff looking bush with fuzzy, spiral tails hanging from small fruit-like berries. It's also called 'palo duro'. Translates to 'hard wood' in Spanish. The Navajo name for it translates to 'wood as heavy as stone'. Because of its hardness, it is sometimes used as a staff to hold wool during spinning. Most other woods would eventually wear out where the staff spins against a frame."
It's interesting information, but doesn't advance the plot. It does, however, make the landscape a main character within the story, with the wide sky, sandy washes and wind-swept rocks as well drawn as their human counterparts:
"The upper end of the lake seemed to be swallowed up, disappearing into the open maw of southern Colorado. Much closer, along the nearer shores, red rock formations rose here and there and reflected rosy or copper in the clear dark water. Pictographs and petroglyphs marked the highest, most inaccessible cliffs, screaming ancient culture and history at the current passersby."
Waldrip has a gift for descriptive narrative and manufactures believable dialogue. But this work of fiction sometimes falls over the line to fantasy, with dissertations on overpopulation and environmental concerns weighting it down.
The novel takes a few sharp turns as it spirals out of the mystery genre into science fiction and love story territory. But for readers eager to soak up a little Native American culture along with their sci-fi yarn, it's a trip worth taking.
Deepest Fears Become Reality In Griz Nightmare
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By George Randall
The prospect of confronting a giant grizzly bear alone in the wilderness is a metaphor for facing one's deepest fears and insecurities. In Griz Nightmare, a gritty action-adventure yarn, the main character, Jim Wilson, must do just that. The story begins when Wilson and his three pals go bow hunting for elk in a remote section of Montana inhabited by wild grizzly bear. At the same time, three convicts escape from prison with the intention of crossing into Canada unobserved at a remote border in northern Montana.
On their way, the convicts kidnap two women and rape and brutalize them as they head for the Canadian border. Soon after, they accidentally encounter Wilson and his compatriots on the trail and decide to rob and kill them. After a violent confrontation, Wilson manages to escape and hide out in the mountainous wilderness. What follows is a classic tale of the hunter being hunted-- and then becoming the hunter again. In the process, the main character must face his deepest and darkest fears.
Written in a taut, spare style with lots of dialogue, the fast-paced novel will particularly appeal to readers who enjoy hunting and the outdoors life. Throughout the book there are many tips and insights about surviving in the wilderness and learning life's lessons through the observation of animal behavior, as in this passage: "He remembered the times he'd watched the antics of mother killdeers. When her brood or the nest was threatened by his presence, invariably she would develop a 'broken' wing and flop on the ground in a pitiful manner. As a small kid he had chased after a few of them before he understood what was happening. She would struggle along just out of reach until he was safely away from the vicinity of her young. Then she would quickly leave him behind."
Unfortunately, there are also many passages in Griz Nightmare that fall prey to cliché and bad writing, such as: "So the man was simply going to kill them and take their money. But something was screwy about his approach to accomplish it. This was a lot of conversation that didn't seem to be necessary for his purpose." In addition, some of the characters need more depth and motivation for their actions, and there are several scenes in the novel that seem contrived and inconsistent. Nevertheless, the author is able to hold the reader's interest as the story unwinds and leads the main character to his ultimate showdown and test of courage.
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'Free Market' Fanatics Pave the Way For New Gilded Age in United States It can't happen here, it can't happen here... I checked it out a couple of times. --Frank Zappa
Paul Krugman, the unabashed liberal economist and award-winning newspaper columnist, skewers the Bush administration and the usual gang of right-wing desperados and free market scam artists in his latest book, The Great Unraveling: Losing Our Way in the New Century. Krugman's book is actually a compilation of his twice-weekly Op-Ed columns in the New York Times (plus a preface and introduction) that explains his dread and deep concern for the economic problems that lie ahead for the United States.
In his introduction, he warns that if the Bush administration's economic ideology, heavily influenced by right-wing think tanks like the Heritage Foundation, continues to its logical conclusion, America will lose all the New Deal and Great Society programs that have helped average citizens since the Great Depression. He goes on to say that "the people now in charge really don't like America as it is. If you combine their apparent agendas, the goal would seem to be something like this: a country that basically has no safety net at home, which relies mainly on military force to enforce its will abroad, in which schools don't teach evolution, but do teach religion and-possibly-in which elections are only a formality."
This past month, the Online Review managed to intercept the busy Princeton economics professor and discuss his book with him. We also talked about related political and economic issues currently in the news.
OR: In your book you discuss how the radical right wants to abolish all taxes on capital and only have taxes on labor. Does this mean that they would like to see a pre-New Deal America, like the Gilded Age where workers are routinely exploited and there is a huge disparity between the rich and poor?
PK: Well, they would reject that idea of what the Gilded Age was like. But if you ask the question, does the Heritage Foundation or Grover Norquist want to take us back to a period before the New Deal existed, the answer is yes. They are quite clear about that. In fact, when Norquist was asked about whether he wants to take us back to before the New Deal, he said, no, that he wanted to take us back to before the Progressive Era. Now, the Bush administration would deny that it wants anything like that, but people in his administration have advocated those views before they became members of the administration, and the people backing them are pretty clear that that is their goal.
OR: Speaking of Grover Norquist, in your book you also talk about how many members of the House of Representatives are "true believers in the miraculous powers of the free market-they are in effect members of a sect that believes that markets will work even when the businessmen actually involved say they won't." I suppose individuals like Grover Norquist would fall into this category as well.
PK: Yes, that's right.
OR: But here's what I don't understand. A lot of these zealots on the far right who espouse this type of philosophy, like Tom DeLay, for example, did not come from privileged backgrounds, yet they seem to look back to the late 1800s and early 1900s and think it was a great time for the average person in America. Don't they know their history? Don't they know how bad working conditions for most average Americans were in that era? Didn't they ever read books like The Jungle?
PK: They believe that is all left-wing propaganda. Of course they will say that the country was poorer then and that the average standard of living was lower, but they believe there was also good stuff happening during that era, like people taking more responsibility for their lives. In addition, they believe that anything good that evolved from that time was a result of the free market.
OR: What about individuals like Bush or Cheney? Are they really true believers, or are they just scam artists who use this right-wing free market philosophy to promote their own self-interests?
PK: I don't think they're really big believers in the free market; in fact, I know they're not. For example, when push comes to shove, and there's a question of subsidies for energy companies, or for other groups that they support, they're all for government intervention. So I don't think they're really free marketers. Actually, I'm not sure what is in the mind of somebody like Dick Cheney, but I do think he believes that people with the right connections should run things.
OR: In other words, he's an elitist.
PK: I would call him an oligarch. read more
Hypocrisy Is Not Heroic In an age where image is reality, and Corporate America protects the 'free market' at all costs, the meaning of the term 'hero' needs to be seriously re-examined.
By J.F. Miglio
In a plutocracy, the natural hero is the man who robs a bank. --William Carlos Williams
There was a time when Americans knew what it meant to be a hero. But thanks to the last few decades of corporate mind control, mass media distortion, and political double speak, the term has lost its meaning. As a result, Americans too often compromise their principles, give in to the "bad guys," and condemn anyone who questions their motives or points out the flaws in the system. Not a very heroic way to live, yet shouldn't everyone be a hero in his (or her) own life? In order to answer this question, we need to re-examine what the word itself means. For the definition, I'll defer to Joseph Campbell, the world's foremost authority on mythology and author of the classic book, The Hero with a Thousand Faces.
According to Campbell, who died in 1987, a hero is an individual who has gone beyond the normal range of human experience to perform an extraordinary act or deed; in addition, he is an individual who is willing to risk or sacrifice his life for a cause greater than himself or other than himself. Historically, the hero has embodied these qualities: honesty, bravery, unselfishness, compassion, inviolate personal ethics, and a commitment to never give up, to fight until the end. Campbell also divides the hero into two subcategories: action heroes, who achieve their objectives through violent or militaristic means, and spiritual heroes, who achieve their objectives through non-violent or passive resistance.
One of the great action heroes of ancient times was King Leonides of Sparta who defended the pass of Thermopylae in northern Greece with only three hundred troops against Xerxes, the Persian King, who had thousands of troops. According to the historical account, Leonides knew he and his men had no chance of victory, but their goal was simply to delay Xerxes and his army in order to give Athens and Sparta more time to prepare their armies for war. "Stand and die" was the battle cry among the three hundred Spartans, and for three days they held off Xerxes' troops until eventually they were overwhelmed, and each Spartan warrior was killed, including King Leonides. Their noble fight to the finish, however, gave Greece the time to prepare for battle and ultimately win the war against Persia. This act of heroism, which highlights patriotism, bravery, and self-sacrifice, set the standard for military battles for centuries to come.
In contrast, the spiritual hero uses moral rectitude and nonviolence as his tools of the trade, but like the action hero, he is prepared to sacrifice his life if necessary. Socrates and Christ, for example, were two great spiritual heroes who died for their beliefs, as were Gandhi and Martin Luther King Jr. Joan of Arc was a spiritual hero, but a unique one because she was also an action hero (and a woman) who led her troops into battle at a time and in a culture that did not sanction female warriors. Unfortunately, she ultimately sacrificed her own life and became a martyr (dead hero), the fate of many heroes, or as F. Scott Fitzgerald noted, "Show me a hero, and I will write you a tragedy."
Dating back to the ancient Greeks, the hero was a primary archetype of Western culture and was celebrated in stories and song. During the twentieth century in America, however, the archetype began to change as our society evolved culturally, and by the 1960s, the heroic archetype came under attack. Black Americans, for example, objected to the fact that the mainstream media almost always portrayed a white American in the role of the hero. Women also objected to the fact that most often the hero was a male rather than a female. In addition, the Vietnam War changed the perception of war itself and the role of a hero.
During this era, another archetype evolved: the antihero. The antihero, or alternative hero, as I prefer to call him, embodied many of the same qualities of the traditional hero, but unlike the traditional hero, he was decidedly anti-establishment. The alternative hero, of course, was not a totally new phenomenon; in fact, one could make a case that some of the ancient Greek heroes, Odysseus, for example, could be interpreted as more alternative hero than traditional hero. In more recent times, Dashiell Hammett's detective character Sam Spade was a classic alternative hero, and Humphrey Bogart, the actor who portrayed him in The Maltese Falcon, the movie version of the book by the same name, became famous for playing alternative heroes in the movies.
The concept of the alternative hero reached its apotheosis during the cultural revolution of the late1960s and early 1970s. During this period, the traditional, clean-cut, God-fearing hero of post World War II America had become corny, passé, and at odds with the prevailing political zeitgeist. He was a relic from another era who represented the "plastic" values of the 1950s establishment. On screen he was embodied by John Wayne, but even "The Duke," the quintessential western film hero of the World War II generation, was being outgunned and replaced by Clint Eastwood's gritty new alternative western hero whom he portrayed in "spaghetti westerns" like A Fistful of Dollars and The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly. The new archetype portrayed by Eastwood was a perfect fit for the Baby Boom generation of the sixties; he was unkempt and iconoclastic, a bounty hunter, not a soldier or a lawman, and he didn't like taking orders. He was an existentialist who created his own code of ethics, the same way that rebels or gangsters did, and he foreshadowed a changing world where the line between the good guys and the bad guys was becoming progressively more blurred.
But just as the alternative hero replaced the traditional hero, a new archetype, what I call the "corporate hero," replaced the alternative hero in the 1980s. The new corporate hero was a product of the Reagan era. He was a stalwart proponent of free market capitalism and Ayn Rand objectivism, a staunch anti-communist and disciple of ultra-conservatives like Milton Freedom and William F. Buckley Jr. Where the alternative hero of the sixties was an anti-establishment rebel, the corporate hero of the eighties was a super-establishment businessman. But he was not like Sinclair Lewis' Babbitt, the old-fashioned conformist businessman who goes to church on Sundays, gripes about unions and high taxes, and occasionally feels guilty about his affluent lifestyle. No, he was more like Gordon Gecko, the ruthless, greed-driven character Michael Douglass portrays in the movie Wall Street. The Gecko character was patterned after real life cutthroat capitalists like Michael Milkin and Ivan Boesky, both of whom went to jail for their financial misdeeds. Boesky, of course, was credited with coining the term, "Greed is good," and he spoke for a whole generation of corporate heroes and all-around swell guys like "Chainsaw" Al Dunlop, "Neutron" Jack Welch, and "Kenny Boy" Lay.
Predictably, the mainstream media, forever obeisant to their corporate masters, were quick to lionize these heroes of cutthroat capitalism and couldn't wait to put them on the front covers of magazines and do flattering interviews with them on television. Even college professors lauded these immoral, ruthless creeps as "smart cookies" worthy of admiration. In fact, I personally know of a case where a professor at a prominent business school actually showed the movie Wall Street to his students not as a cautionary tale of good verses evil, but as a primer on how to be a consummate businessman!
In the old days, this type of corporate hero, who represented greed, ruthlessness, selfishness, and lack of ethics and morals, would have been considered evil and identified as a "villain," an archetype as old as the hero himself. Charles Dickens, for example, was noted for writing classic villains who fit into this category, and more often than not, his villains were businessmen, like Ebenezer Scrooge, the prototype of the miser who values money above all else. Twentieth century Hollywood continued in the Dickens' tradition and often depicted the villain as a tightfisted, read more
Was Julius Caesar Killed for Being a Social Reformer?
Noted Author Maintains Scholars Write History from Elitist Viewpoint
Known for his populist views that challenge conventional wisdom, author Michael Parenti presents a compelling account of ancient Rome--quite different from the one most of us studied in school-- in his new, Pulitzer Prize-nominated book, The Assassination of Julius Caesar: A People's History of Ancient Rome (The New Press; 2003). Parenti, who received his Ph.D. in political science from Yale and is the author of over 250 articles and 17 books, maintains that the history of ancient Rome has not been fairly or accurately portrayed throughout the ages because the aristocratic scholars who recorded Roman history were promoting an elitist viewpoint. Moreover, he contends that most modern scholars and historians have accepted that viewpoint without challenging it.
The Online Review recently caught up with the prolific writer and discussed his new book with him. We also talked about the agenda of the mainstream news media and the questions surrounding 9/11.
| Interview with Michael Parenti |
OR: In your latest book you make the case that history is written from an elitist point of view because all the writers of the time came from the privileged class. Would you say all history has been written this way?
MP: Yes, as a matter of fact, I wrote another book called History Is Mystery with that very same theme. That is, the victors in history are the ones who write it, and the victors are usually the ones who are the dominant socio-economic interests of the society. They themselves may not write it, but their faithful scribes do, people in their employ.
OR: Which goes along with another theme in your book. Although you discuss Julius Caesar's flaws and foibles, basically you see him as a social reformer who wanted to give more opportunity to average citizens. As a result, he made many enemies in the Roman Senate who wanted to get rid of him.
MP: Yes, Caesar was a much more democratic leader than Brutus or Cassius or any of the individuals who killed him. For example, he started rhetoric schools for ordinary people. These schools usually were the province only for the very rich, and he initiated a number of democratic reforms, strengthened the tribal assemblies, and took powers away from the oligarchic aristocracy in the Senate. When the Romans took over Athens during the first civil war, he re-instituted a democratic constitution for Athens. He also called for the public posting and publishing of the proceedings of the Roman Senate to expose what the Senators were saying and doing in order to make them more accountable. read more
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